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I WAS SO DISMAYED,
AS, ONE BY ONE, THE SUPER DELEGATES BETRAYED.
SHE GAVE IT HER ALL
YET, MANY OF HER SO-CALLED FRIENDS, HAD THE GALL
TO LET HER FALL.
THEY REMEMBERED THEIR FRIENDS,
WHEN THEY MADE IT TO THE TOP.
BUT WHEN SHE NEEDED THEM,
THEY DECIDED TO DO A FLIP-FLOP.
MARK MY WORDS:
SHE WILL NOT STOP,
TILL SHE REACHES THE TOP!!!
A poem written by my mother. I'm posting this here for her because she doesn't have an account to post it on. Let me know what you think of it & I will tell her what you said ^_^
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DaneLurex Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2008
Loves the rhymes ^^
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Okitakehyate Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2008
glad you do ^_^ did you read mine about the glass ceiling too?
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DaneLurex Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2008
I did... I liked parts of it, but i don't support anything of political nature
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Okitakehyate Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008
nothing political huh? is it cuz your live in another country and aren't really involved in what happens here? lol glad you liked parts of it. I was trying emphasize how hard I'd try to shatter that glass celeiling so that a woman could be president, how stobbornly I'd fight for it, & how I'm powerless do anything in the end & the saddness & frustraition I felt about it being so close yet so far. Did I succeed at expressing that? That is exactly how I'd act if it were a "real glass celeiling" that had to be broken too. I'd feel it was just begging to be broken yet taunting me by refusing to break! :XD: Like a golf ball that rolls around the rim of the hole & doesn't go in, or one last bowling pin that wobbles around but doesn't fall over... or a ball on a ruelette wheel that one number a way from the number you bet on when the wheel stops & doesn't pop into the next space... I feel like I should have blew on that golf ball, stomped the ground to shake the floor, or bumped that wheel with my elbow! :XD:
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DaneLurex Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008
nope... I keep myself updated... with U.S matters as well!
I just dislike when people show off their political tendencies and presenting their beliefs as the truth...
Truth is we all strive after the same thing... we just have different ideas as to how best to achieve those goals...
we all strive after a better world...

hope it clarifies what I mean
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Okitakehyate Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008
yeah I think I see what you mean...
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